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Give me your heart
So I can tear it apart
That's all i've been doin' these days

Just give me a start
So I can start it apart
I hate to be hurt these days

Get closer than air
So I stop the time we share
I won't get jealous these days

Just give me the time
So I can say the line
I've been pressured to say these days

Miss me some more
So I have to be a bore
I want to live my life these days

Just keep me on my toes
So I can run on my heels
I like to run away these days

Doubt a little more
So I can remind you
I'm good at lying these days

Tempt me some more
So I can move from security
I feel reckless these days

Just lose a little more
So I lose confidence in you
I am fickle these days

Show some love for me
So I can finally say goodbye
I've been trying to hide away these days

It shouldn't be this hard...
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Author's Comments

Wrote for my ex. A few days before our breakup...
Felt like showing it, currently in the process of making notes on piano for it.

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:iconshadowravenwings:
I really like it... I like the emotion :)

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"A casual stroll through the lunatic asylum shows that faith does not prove anything." -Nietzche
:iconnuggetgirl:
Thanks!! ;P

--
The moving finger writes; and having writ,
Moves on:nor all thy piety not wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a word of it.

}Demented Angel{ >inevitably cute<
:iconkylecriedthecaptain:
I love the direction you came from with this. I've said before to other writers, rhyming isn't one of my favorite things to read with how standard and common it is, but like I said the direction is awesome, and how progressive the lines are is great.

Great work!
:iconnuggetgirl:
Thank you! and thanks for the fav!! I appreciate it ^.^

--
The moving finger writes; and having writ,
Moves on:nor all thy piety not wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a word of it.

}Demented Angel{ >inevitably cute<
:iconfarmered:
This is a beautiful piece...

--
Oh look! a purple butterfly! <3
:iconnuggetgirl:
thank you

--
The moving finger writes; and having writ,
Moves on:nor all thy piety not wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a word of it.

}Demented Angel{ >inevitably cute<

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